alias_obsessedfan
Cadet
Ok i have written the first chapter of a new story. I would love it if you all let me know what you think
Of course the usual disclaimers are there: Everything belongs to the genius of the man JJ Abrams.
Chapter One
Life for Michael Vaughn was on its way to being normal again, well as normal as possible considering he was a secret agent working for the CIA. He had the love of his life back and even though they were taking things extremely slow he was happy he still he had her back and that’s all that mattered, Michael Vaughn wasn’t about to let anything come between himself and Sydney Bristow - that was until……….
Sydney walked through her front door accompanied by Vaughn
“Man after all these years I still love the Zamboni..”
“But is coming home with me still the best part?”
“Oh I don’t know, that Zamboni was pretty amazing tonight”
Sydney and Vaughn laughed and lapsed into a comfortable silence.
“Did you want a coffee?” Sydney asked
“I’d love one”
Vaughn watched as Sydney efficiently began making the coffee, Sydney noticed him staring
“What?” She asked smiling
“Nothing, it’s just you’re so beautiful”
“Stop” Sydney said blushing
Vaughn opened his mouth to reply when his phone rang,
“Hold that thought” He said as he answered the phone “Vaughn”
Vaughn listened, looked at Sydney and then promptly left the room. Sydney didn’t think much of it and continued making the coffee – they would need it for what the night held in store for them. Things were finally beginning to be normal again in their relationship after the year before Sydney and Vaughn were finally beginning to find the kind of relationship they had before Lauren.
Vaughn walked back into the room slowly a shocked look on his face.
“Vaughn are you ok?” Sydney asked worried
“She’s dead”
“Who’s dead?”
“She had a child?”
“Who had a child? Vaughn you’re not making sense.”
“Alice”
I love kids really - i just want a baby to take home look after and then when it cries give it back. i always seem to have kids in my story. please tell me how this or what i could do better????
**emma
Of course the usual disclaimers are there: Everything belongs to the genius of the man JJ Abrams.
Chapter One
Life for Michael Vaughn was on its way to being normal again, well as normal as possible considering he was a secret agent working for the CIA. He had the love of his life back and even though they were taking things extremely slow he was happy he still he had her back and that’s all that mattered, Michael Vaughn wasn’t about to let anything come between himself and Sydney Bristow - that was until……….
Sydney walked through her front door accompanied by Vaughn
“Man after all these years I still love the Zamboni..”
“But is coming home with me still the best part?”
“Oh I don’t know, that Zamboni was pretty amazing tonight”
Sydney and Vaughn laughed and lapsed into a comfortable silence.
“Did you want a coffee?” Sydney asked
“I’d love one”
Vaughn watched as Sydney efficiently began making the coffee, Sydney noticed him staring
“What?” She asked smiling
“Nothing, it’s just you’re so beautiful”
“Stop” Sydney said blushing
Vaughn opened his mouth to reply when his phone rang,
“Hold that thought” He said as he answered the phone “Vaughn”
Vaughn listened, looked at Sydney and then promptly left the room. Sydney didn’t think much of it and continued making the coffee – they would need it for what the night held in store for them. Things were finally beginning to be normal again in their relationship after the year before Sydney and Vaughn were finally beginning to find the kind of relationship they had before Lauren.
Vaughn walked back into the room slowly a shocked look on his face.
“Vaughn are you ok?” Sydney asked worried
“She’s dead”
“Who’s dead?”
“She had a child?”
“Who had a child? Vaughn you’re not making sense.”
“Alice”
I love kids really - i just want a baby to take home look after and then when it cries give it back. i always seem to have kids in my story. please tell me how this or what i could do better????
**emma